This scene takes place after John knocks over his handicapped boss in the bathroom stall. Try your hand at editing him babble through a series of excused.
This scene is all about comedic timing. Make sure to keep the dialog's pacing snappy, and the wit sharp. Try cutting this scene down to under one minute (estimated first cut 1:30). You may need to remove lines of dialog. Add sound effects and music to this cut, especially as the boss is pulled away by the medics.
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