I want the audience to feel suspense and a little anger. Then I would like them to feed poetic justice was served but for a moment they have no clue how it was.
The boy is your munchkin protagonist, while the businessman is a snark and goof of an antagonist. I aligned the beginning of the cut (boy notices bully spying and runs away) to make the boy appear more vulnerable. This way, his revenge (vicarious revenge?) is all the more redeeming and tickling.
Rough Cut for Bully Spec commercial. Given this is merely a very rough cut, I want the audience to laugh at the absurdness of the man in his quest to crush the kid's spirit. At the end the audience should feel karma won.
This cut introduces the Bully and shows how nasty he can be. Pretty soon he finds out that there are larger fish in the pond. Somewhat funny, but also a bit mysterious introduction to the movie, as we can only suspect what it was that destroyed the car.
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