November 05, 2014
Editor: Jason Cote
Overall you did an excellent job. You should be very proud of your work. I only had 2-3 notes and only 2 which were significant towards the end. You're ready for a harder scene my friend!
The cutting here is really good! I would say the police SFX are a little much. I see what you're going for but maybe just have it towards the part where the stretcher shows us. I actually paused the video and checked outside! How funny is that?
I would say you're 99% of the way there but I bet you could tighten this just a few more frames. Try trimming the head off the next shot and the tail off of this shot just a bit. You don't even really have to, this is pretty darn good.
Editor: Fadi Mawagdeh
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